Airplane Airplane
Heavy Metal
Flying throughout the gigantic sky
Transport, flight
Lots of things to do
Not only flying?
Used for forecasting weather
and rescue
Sometimes it breaks
but almost never
Fast and convenient
The speed of sound
Delta, American Airlines
Asiana air, Korean air
So many companies
Korea, Japn
US, China
So Many Countries
Let's ride airplanes together!
Pretty great ode but litle bit of mistakes in there
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Interesting approach since you wrote your ode in poetry! You gave good characteristics of an airplane: heavy, metal, fast, convenient and etc. However, since it is a poem, try using some elements of poetry such as rhymes: "High up in the FLIGHT, Aren't you afraid of HEIGHT?" Still, it is a good work overall.
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